February 26, 2006

  • Letting things go 
    but never releasing...


    "With Every Picture..."
    by Caleb Cooley (Copyright 2006)


    With every picture it makes it
    harder to
    believe, harder to conceive
    the concept of a constant animosity
    that seemed to
    relieve what was
    perceived
    as
    consistant mendacities
    now seen as the eternal philosophy
    that defeats me constantly.
    Never ceasing, never
    releasing
    its ever
    increasing death grip at my throat.
    It was murder she
    wrote.
    And I quote all my drowning dreames in ink
    To think that it was all I had hoped
    and so much less
    so I must
    confess
    That I've burnt every image
    in the back of my
    eyes.
    In black and white written all the lies
    and never forget what it did to me.
    To always remember what I chose to
    be.
    I refuse to kneel before the sights you choose to see.
    Because with every picture
    it makes it harder to believe
    With every picture
    it makes it harder
    for me
    to breathe.







    I promise that that poem is better when I perform it.  It's called Slam Poetry for a reason...so I'll give a bit of reading advice for all of you.  Try to read it somewhat swiftly while emphasizing rhyming words, paying no attention to the rhyme scheme (((as there is not one, obviously)))...and take pauses at main ideas.  That's what I have to do every time I get up there at the Poet's Loft, so when I read, I try to go over it atleast more than once.  There's just a bit of a tip for all of you, because after reading it like I would normally read poetry, it seems boring.

Comments (12)

  • ryc: im not tryin to communicate with anyone.

  • one cannot be taught how to write- especially poetry. it is ridiculous to think that you can take a poetry course and learn how to write. writing classes don't teach. you are simply in an environment where you read poetry, some theory, and have your poetry workshopped. i personally do not care for prose because i prefer a non-narrative approach to writing.

  • actually, it came from an english class discussion.

  • Hey kid! thanx for the comment...it sux what happened. I'd be sooo incredibly pissed. see ya in 2nd!! later -R.

  • Awesome! And I love you!

    I will most definitely try to go to your show....I'll see if I can drag Justin along....

    Bye!

  • Sexy picture, by the way!

    lol

  • OMG. We were messing around. Get the fuck over it. White boys who think they're gangster get on my nerves too, sweetheart.

    You think I haven't "had my heart broken"?!?! You know one thing about me or any of the things I've gone through so how about you STFU?!  Well you definitely come off as "wrong" but how the hell am I a hypocrite?!

    yeah...um keep "krunk"...wtf ever.

    KT

  • Oh my god I don't understand why you think that's why I said that to him. His entry said "who cares if they get their heart broken" I'm sick of him going out with girls and throwing them away like they're nothing. I don't even care about what happend with he and I. But how he wouldve been to Jessee if she hadn't done it first and then again what he did to Katie. It pissed me off! It couldve been my best guy friend doing it to different girls and I'd still be just as mad at them as I am with Alex.
     
    Anyway..my heart wasn't broken by Alex. I wasn't with him long enough for it to. I was very upset afterwards, yeah. He pretty much used me to make sure he had someone to talk to his first week of school. But that is not why Im the way I am towards him. I just don't get along with him.
     
    I never said I hoped for heartbreak. Honestly now that it's happend I wish him luck with whoever else he gets with. It's just nice to know he got a taste of his own medicine.  
     
    And a layout is a layout. That's not me "jumping out of the tree" or whatever so I don't quite understand where you got that..
     
    I don't need a xanga war with someone I dont know either. But if someone starts one with me Im not going to sit back and take it.
     
    You go to First Lutheran right? are you going to be there Wednesday so we can talk about this in person if anything else needs to be said?
    KT

  • Hey, im just sitting here bored and thought I would leave you a comment. Wo ist mein komm?? LOL!! Well, I need to go and clean my damn room.

    SHAYA.

  • hey that does look like me doesn't it...lol

  • yeah. what can i say. stoked is my word. fo sho.

  • life's treatin me alright
    could be better
    but im not gonna complain
    how you doing?
    haven't talked to you in like a year
    staying outta trouble i hope

    haha
    take it easy

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