February 26, 2006
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Letting things go
but never releasing...
"With Every Picture..."
by Caleb Cooley (Copyright 2006)
With every picture it makes it
harder to believe, harder to conceive
the concept of a constant animosity
that seemed to relieve what was perceived
as consistant mendacities
now seen as the eternal philosophy
that defeats me constantly.
Never ceasing, never releasing
its ever increasing death grip at my throat.
It was murder she wrote.
And I quote all my drowning dreames in ink
To think that it was all I had hoped
and so much less
so I must confess
That I've burnt every image
in the back of my eyes.
In black and white written all the lies
and never forget what it did to me.
To always remember what I chose to be.
I refuse to kneel before the sights you choose to see.
Because with every picture
it makes it harder to believe
With every picture
it makes it harder
for me
to breathe.
I promise that that poem is better when I perform it. It's called Slam Poetry for a reason...so I'll give a bit of reading advice for all of you. Try to read it somewhat swiftly while emphasizing rhyming words, paying no attention to the rhyme scheme (((as there is not one, obviously)))...and take pauses at main ideas. That's what I have to do every time I get up there at the Poet's Loft, so when I read, I try to go over it atleast more than once. There's just a bit of a tip for all of you, because after reading it like I would normally read poetry, it seems boring.
Comments (12)
ryc: im not tryin to communicate with anyone.
one cannot be taught how to write- especially poetry. it is ridiculous to think that you can take a poetry course and learn how to write. writing classes don't teach. you are simply in an environment where you read poetry, some theory, and have your poetry workshopped. i personally do not care for prose because i prefer a non-narrative approach to writing.
actually, it came from an english class discussion.
Hey kid! thanx for the comment...it sux what happened. I'd be sooo incredibly pissed. see ya in 2nd!! later -R.
Awesome! And I love you!
I will most definitely try to go to your show....I'll see if I can drag Justin along....
Bye!
Sexy picture, by the way!
lol
OMG. We were messing around. Get the fuck over it. White boys who think they're gangster get on my nerves too, sweetheart.
You think I haven't "had my heart broken"?!?! You know one thing about me or any of the things I've gone through so how about you STFU?! Well you definitely come off as "wrong" but how the hell am I a hypocrite?!
yeah...um keep "krunk"...wtf ever.
KT
Oh my god I don't understand why you think that's why I said that to him. His entry said "who cares if they get their heart broken" I'm sick of him going out with girls and throwing them away like they're nothing. I don't even care about what happend with he and I. But how he wouldve been to Jessee if she hadn't done it first and then again what he did to Katie. It pissed me off! It couldve been my best guy friend doing it to different girls and I'd still be just as mad at them as I am with Alex.
Anyway..my heart wasn't broken by Alex. I wasn't with him long enough for it to. I was very upset afterwards, yeah. He pretty much used me to make sure he had someone to talk to his first week of school. But that is not why Im the way I am towards him. I just don't get along with him.
I never said I hoped for heartbreak. Honestly now that it's happend I wish him luck with whoever else he gets with. It's just nice to know he got a taste of his own medicine.
And a layout is a layout. That's not me "jumping out of the tree" or whatever so I don't quite understand where you got that..
I don't need a xanga war with someone I dont know either. But if someone starts one with me Im not going to sit back and take it.
You go to First Lutheran right? are you going to be there Wednesday so we can talk about this in person if anything else needs to be said?
KT
Hey, im just sitting here bored and thought I would leave you a comment. Wo ist mein komm?? LOL!! Well, I need to go and clean my damn room.
SHAYA.
hey that does look like me doesn't it...lol
yeah. what can i say. stoked is my word. fo sho.
life's treatin me alright
could be better
but im not gonna complain
how you doing?
haven't talked to you in like a year
staying outta trouble i hope
haha
take it easy
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