January 30, 2006

  • How amazing, I managed to get no comments
    on that last post. 
    How splendid!


    You want to know something I hate? 
    I hate it when people make irrelevant comments on my posts
    and then ask me to comment them back
    "If I love them"




    Today was a decent day.  Before I knew it, lunch had already found it's place in the day.  Yes, a very fast day it was!  Productivity on the other hand may not have been as astonishing.  However, I did manage to divert my attention from schoolwork long enough to write a song, poem, and a few doodles on notebook paper.  I'm not quite done with some of the drawings, but I'll post the writings now, and one drawing that I've finished.



    (The song...)

    (Intro) [Unfinished]

    (Verse 1)
    Truth creating hypnotic lines in space
    Misanthropes dissipate and erase
    Revealing cyan hued lies left askew
    Absolve the weathered, dispose the new

    (Instrumental Break)


    (Verse 2)
    Creation lies within the sum of none.
    Unknown equations presage what all becomes.
    Left blind to truth, no true conception
    Of the hand that moves the constellations.


    (Chorus)
    Breathe for the One
    that makes stars cry out His name.
    Peace be to those
    who do not view the world the same.
    Red-lettered passages
    contain what souls should find.
    Open up hearts
    and the truth will flood your mind!

    (Verse 3) [unfinished]

    (Bridge)
    Reflect upon origins
    from which stars are born.
    The Sun will remember
    the clouds that you scorn.

    ...you are stardust
    in the Creator's Masterpiece...

    (Chorus x2)

    (Outro) [Unfinished]




    (The poem...) [Unfinished???]


    Vacant eyes
    bule the steel
    that peirce flesh
    and kill the will.
    Creating lies among
    cyanide pools for reflection
    abolishing protection
    leaving no recollection
    of truth before
    silent annexation
    of a compromising realism.
    No Sir!
    Imperialism is not practical
    when Capitalism become tactical


    [...to be continued]




    All we need is time to find
    we have all the time in the world.
    People change when
    places stay the same.
    And it leads to confusion
    a mental contusion
    regarding the place from which we came.
    Because people change
    but these places...
    they stay the same.


    (The drawing...) [Band Emblem???]


    I think it's a good concept for a Christian band.
    If you read in the depicted passage (Revelations 6:5)
    you will understand the drawing better.


    It says:

    "When the Lamb opened the third seal,
    I heard the third living creature say, 'Come!'  I
    looked, and there before me was a black horse! 
    Its rider was holding a pair of scales in his hand."


    My interpretation of the black horse is that it symbolizes
    equality and justice.  That is what the world could use
    a little more of after all. 



    Deuces,
    [buff]MUFF


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Comments (11)

  • yo cousin... is there somethin worng with throwin up the westside? lol oh and thanks fer #1. lol. so what are you up to? do i know you? lol. well i guess i'm bout to bizounce. so hit me back

  • Umm I like the poem...er, I gotta go attend to some business...yeah...*business*, no im just kiddin, I gots lotsa homework...or do I??

    Harris, Shaya Leigh.

  • hey Caleb!
    how's it going?
    haven't talked to you in a while
    thought i would say hello and see how things were

    take it easy
    xoxOlivia

  • Hey caleb! uhm its been a while ! commment back if you love me!

    aub

  • uhhhh... i sing....as you ALL knw...but that's all im saying about it.. i do <3 you though... hehe...see ya tomorrow. -em

  • Ilove your song and poem. The drawing is really cool, too. Isn't that the one that your friend did? It looks like you tweaked it, a bit. I love your interpretation of it, as well. It's most assuredly true, though...and did I really not comment you on your last one? Hmm....I usually do.....

    Love ya, sug...Talk to you, later, hopefully.

  • And I'm insulted....I most definitely DID comment on your last post!

  • You commented after I posted this, or rather, while I was typing it.

  • Ur really good at writing lyrics (but u already knew that lol) So hows it been going? <3laurah

  • Wow, You did all that In one day? That all rocks I like all of that. You really have been blesed by God for you talents! Yah I think we do got things in that we like,like kids and God. I really dig Rev. too. Great depliction of Rev 6:5.

    How long have you been playing/writeing for a band?

    Your song is really Great! I uslly dont subsribe to Guys but your seem nice and very talented. So Im going to be your 89th.

                                                                     Talk to you later,

                                                                     Cameron

    Ps How did you come arcoss my site?

  • Shite, I keep forgetting to comment you.  Whoops.  *cringes*

    I like the poem.  And did you do that drawing?  It's amazing.

    -Jonathan, aka -=The Grammar Nazi=-

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